ext_39807 ([identity profile] rifleman-s.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] swissmarg 2014-01-02 08:24 pm (UTC)

"... but I can live without Sarah. I can't live without you, and I can't live with myself making you unhappy.""

That was quite a powerful read. Normally, I would never read het, but since it was you and since there was the chance of John/Sherlock, too, I did read, and actually your brilliant writing took all the sting out of it, and it just became . . . (yes, I'll admit it!) erotic.

I also liked you getting behind Sarah's reasoning - she actually prefersJohn to live with Sherlock so that she doesn't have any domestic complications, but sees just enough of John to keep things bubbling over. Great that she's "accepted" Sherlock, too.

Seeing Sherlock's face shining with their combined fluid was quite remarkable - it was all a most ingenious idea and and the outcome of the "experiment" well worth the effort.

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