ext_39807 ([identity profile] rifleman-s.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] swissmarg 2014-02-25 01:19 pm (UTC)

"Tristram's stomach twists more than a little uncomfortably. He feels absolutely wretched."

It's wonderful the way you write the difference between the child's view of things and what we, as adults, know. Tristram is wonderful in that he always tries to reason things out and make them make sense, but without all the data, is always lacking.

At least Sherlock is trying to understand his distress.

Post a comment in response:

This account has disabled anonymous posting.
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting