http://lisap4.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] lisap4.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] swissmarg 2016-02-14 09:53 pm (UTC)

I'm totally with you on that one. Honestly, the way you wrote that scene made such wonderful use of tension and anticipation. One of the best "first time" scenes I have ever read. I especially loved the phrase "rabbiting heart." Beautiful!
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