http://leafairy124.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] leafairy124.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] swissmarg 2011-07-25 01:07 am (UTC)

Oh, I am so glad that I found this gem! This was such a lovely fic!

First of all, I love Hermione/Viktor stories (well, well written ones at least...) - There really isn't enough out there and this one of yours was just beautiful!

I loved the setting with newly-divorced!mommy!Hermione and Viktor meeting years later at a party (his party in fact). Great job with the little details too - I especially liked the part with Hugo and his magic acting up since her and Ron split up. I also loved how Hermione and Viktor acted with each other - Hermione nervous and kinda shy, while Viktor was intense and kinda forceful with not wanting to lose a chance to get to know Hermione again. They really had great chemistry in this - it was so well done!

I really liked the open ending as well. Nicely balanced with just the promise for something special in the future *sighs* Wonderful.

Anyhoo, this was an all around lovely story! Thanks so much for writing!!

PS: Have you thought of posting this to GrangerEnchanted in the future?

Post a comment in response:

This account has disabled anonymous posting.
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting