Goodness. You wrote this for a 24 hour porn challenge. You are flipping amazing. This story - I honestly had to read it twice before I could even attempt to leave a coherent comment, and I'm making no promises at this point. This is beautiful and inspiring. The touches of humor - you capture perfectly that aspect of canon. Humor and sex are so essential and equally difficult to blend, to balance, and you've accomplished it perfectly, without question. You just - completely nailed it - their relationship and how it could evolve - if only there were a dreamscape handy...