I loved the way you built and built on the tension Tristram was feeling as he deduced what was going on and then decided to share it. I was almost holding my breath! I was pretty sure what he was going to find in his father's room, and I was willing him not to go in!
In the end they handled it quite well and I think Tristram was comforted by his father acting as he normally would. I think John is more traumatised than anyone!!
It's a bit scary, though, wondering who was smoking that cigarette . . .
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Date: 2014-02-20 01:20 pm (UTC)In the end they handled it quite well and I think Tristram was comforted by his father acting as he normally would. I think John is more traumatised than anyone!!
It's a bit scary, though, wondering who was smoking that cigarette . . .