Date: 2015-01-08 04:19 pm (UTC)
"Sherlock would like very much, at this point, to drag John back to his room — the caveman imagery, incidentally, not being lost on him — and take his time unpeeling, unveiling, undoing, unraveling... and maybe, finally, understanding."

I loved your use of alliteration - here and earlier with the "a" . . . like a headlong rush into the pleasure they just can't stay away from.

*on to part 2*
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