”... then kissed a line along his jaw back to his mouth and concluded in a low voice, "By any means we deem mutually pleasurable."”
”John felt more in love with him at that moment, more grateful that he'd been gifted of a life with this man, and more humbled by the love he felt in return, than his body was able to contain.”
*happy, happy smile*
I’ve just read the whole of this story – it was amazing. Most inventive, very funny (I lost track of how many times I laughed out loud), touching, moving, and with an absolutely perfect ending.
We tend to think of Sherlock as analysing everything, but in this story it was John who took over that role – sometimes I wanted just to shake him and tell him not to think so much!
I’m sorry I didn’t comment in each chapter; I just wanted to get onto the next one! The episode with the washing powder was particularly memorable – fancy John not realising that washing-powder-in-the-fridge equals An Experiment!!
The last chapter was just the perfect ending – it was, I believe, “right” for the way they would get together – mutually tentative, exploratory and loving.
Thank you so much for such a truly enjoyable story.
I’m now off to discover what else you’ve written!!
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Date: 2013-02-08 02:45 pm (UTC)”John felt more in love with him at that moment, more grateful that he'd been gifted of a life with this man, and more humbled by the love he felt in return, than his body was able to contain.”
*happy, happy smile*
I’ve just read the whole of this story – it was amazing. Most inventive, very funny (I lost track of how many times I laughed out loud), touching, moving, and with an absolutely perfect ending.
We tend to think of Sherlock as analysing everything, but in this story it was John who took over that role – sometimes I wanted just to shake him and tell him not to think so much!
I’m sorry I didn’t comment in each chapter; I just wanted to get onto the next one! The episode with the washing powder was particularly memorable – fancy John not realising that washing-powder-in-the-fridge equals An Experiment!!
The last chapter was just the perfect ending – it was, I believe, “right” for the way they would get together – mutually tentative, exploratory and loving.
Thank you so much for such a truly enjoyable story.
I’m now off to discover what else you’ve written!!